WWW: You pick out some good aspects from the production
and your assessment of the strengths and weaknesses is pretty honest and
accurate.
EBI: However, you haven’t completed the task – there are
only 400 words here and 500 was the absolute minimum. Written English is poor
in places – I don’t think you have proof-read this work and overall this lack
of attention to detail is extremely disappointing. In fact, I’m starting to
become quite worried you will underachieve in Media – this is way below what we
expect and your Film Language assessment was an E grade. A pattern is
developing that you need to actively address – if you want a good grade in
Media you need to change the way you work and do it quickly. For this
evaluation, you write a lot about the process but don’t analyse the production
as a media text. For the real evaluation in March you must consider the impact
on audience and deconstruct the aspects of film language in detail.
LR:
- I will need to re-read over my work.
- Make sure what I talk about is more detailed, e.g, the different aspects of film language.
- I need to consider the impact of the audiences.
- Instead of writing about the process, I need to analyse the production as a media text.
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